The Liebster Awards

•May 7, 2013 • 6 Comments

I would like to thank Elisabeth D. Rosa for nominating me for the Liebster Awards. This is the first time I have been nominated. This award is for blogs with 200 or fewer followers. I’m going to be nominating 11 other blogs after this in accordance with these rules:

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I have made a video with the 11 Factoids about Moi, and the other stuffs, the answers to the questions from my nominee, will be below it in interview format. Last, will be my nominees and their questions.

11 Factoids about Moi

My Answers to Elisabeth’s Questions

Q.What would you say is your interesting writing quirk?

I’m not sure “failure to understand commas” counts as a writing quirk. I hate commas, they are evil and are totally out to get me. Other than that, I think I’ve noticed an inordinately large number of stories I’ve written are about fertility, infertility, and pregnancy gone wrong – I’m starting to think this might reflect some deep seated issues I have about my fertility problems.

Q. What was one of the most surprising things you learned in creating your own books?

Before I finally got the courage to write my own books, I noticed a typo in a book by a mainstream publisher. I was so excited, I decided I could just write novels, and they would not have to be grammatically perfect or anything. I was surprised to learn that no matter how many times I proof them, or get other people to proof them, they still have more typos than the mainstream published kind. I think the mainstream publishers probably have staffs with dozens of editors and proofreaders going over the texts multiple times – not just three of their lit-chick friends, and that one dude who is the editor on a state university student paper.

Q. Where do you get the ideas for your books?

From my nightmares, and my deeply wounded psyche. When it comes to the science fiction I also get a lot of inspiration from the world of politics and today’s headlines. Even there, I find that a lot of the storylines seem to come from my own bizarre thoughts and dreams. I had to stop writing fanfic because it was all deeply disturbed, and I figured that I should just take personal responsibility for all of the scary, twisted things that hang out in my mind. When I say “today’s headlines” I don’t just mean politics. A lot of the pseudo-science in “Warmth” was inspired by stories coming across my Facebook feed about insects and fungi that take over and zombify other lifeforms, like bees. Reality is filled with endless examples of disturbing ideas for horror and dystopic or apocalyptic science-fiction. “Solitude” was influenced by people freaking out about the so-called Mayan prophecy and endless episodes of the program “Life After People.”

Q. What do you think makes a good story?

Strong characters matter. If the characters aren’t interesting, it’s harder to keep the reader engaged. This means both sympathetic heroes and hate-inspiring villains, and sometimes hate-inspiring heroes and sympathetic villains – it depends on the story. I like to use a lot of descriptive language. I love to include some kind of major twists and turns and surprises because I am one of those peoples who can always guess what is going to happen in a movie. I like to use that mental gift to come up with new and exciting ways to keep people guessing, because I always figure that the best way to write things my readers will like is to think of what would excite me as a reader.

Q. Who are some of your favorite authors?

Frank Herbert, Stephen King, Anne Rice, Toni Morrison, Peter Straub, Michael Criton, Clive Barker, Susan Cooper, C.S. Lewis, Alice Walker – although, mostly she writes poetry – Dean Koontz, well you get the picture – I’m really into commercial suspense and horror, with a side of sci-fi.

Q. If you could pick one actor to play a character in your book in the movie version, who would it be?

Amandla Stenberg, that little girl who played Rue in the “Hunger Games”, could play Tisha Gordon in “The Moon Cried Blood.” I loved her in Colombiana. Of course, she will be too old for the role before a movie is ever made. If a movie is ever made, which is really highly unlikely since nobody knows or cares who I am right now. But maybe we could get Quvenzhané Wallis, she’ll be old enough to play Leticia Gordon in three or four years. And maybe by then, more than 200 people will have read my book.

Q. What song best describes your book, and why?

Fun. Let’s see… for “Solitude” we can have “One is the Loneliest Number” by Three Dog Night, because I think that’s funny, mostly. It’s a story about everyone disappearing and the few people remaining thinking they are the last person left. Yea. I better quit while I’m ahead.

Q. If you had one piece of advice for an aspiring author, what would it be?

Don’t let any of your critical friends read it until you’re done with a first draft, because you might get too discouraged to finish. Don’t let your internal critic speak while you are in the middle of a first draft, either. You can’t write and do re-writes at the same time. Write first, do re-writes second. I wish someone had told me that when I was younger, I would have probably finished my first novel fifteen years ago if I wasn’t busy trying to edit it in the middle of writing it.

Q. What kind of sweet things do you like to eat?

They just told me my blood sugar was a little high and to cut back on sweets, so the only sweet things I have left are breakfast cereal and sugar free Popsicles and Jello. I really miss eating soft serve. I like soft serve. I know – it’s not even real ice cream – but still.

Q. What’s your guilty pleasure that you can’t miss on TV?

I don’t feel guilty about any of the TV shows I follow, so, not sure if I can say guilty pleasure but I loved Spartacus and I miss that. I also like Game of Thrones, Vikings, Supernatural, Grimm, Supernatural, Lost Girl and Defiance. Oh and The Borgias.

Q. What funny memories do you have of your childhood? Name one.

My mom used to keep me in two ponytails as a child. I remember one time when I was five or six I decided that it would be a good idea to put one of my father’s sweat socks over each pony tail so I could walk around on all fours and pretend to be a dog with big, floppy ears. I don’t think my parents found this as amusing as I did, though, since all of their stories of my childhood seemed to be really embarrassing and involve poop.

My Nominees

  1. The Secret Chicken
  2. Gothic Genie
  3. Myriads of Thoughts
  4. Textual Fury
  5. A Poets Progress
  6. Light Bearer
  7. Kitty Muse and Me
  8. Come Selaway with Me
  9. Year in the Life of an Opera Singer
  10. No Pants
  11. Wench Writer

My Questions for My Nominees

  1. What inspired you to start blogging?
  2. How long have you been blogging?
  3. Out of the blog posts you’ve written, which is your favorite or the one you feel the best about?
  4. What advice would you give to other bloggers?
  5. Do you prefer video, audio, or written blogs, or some combination of the three?
  6. Do you think that blogging is bring new voices to the worlds of art, literature, fashion, entertainment and politics in a way we hadn’t experienced before the internet?
  7. How do you think print columns compare to blogs?
  8. If you could interview anyone for your blog, who would it be?
  9. How did you come up with the name for your blog?
  10. Random acts of kindness – what was the last one you witnessed that brightened your day?
  11. What was the best thing that happened to you this year?

 

Second Edition of “Warmth”, and editing in general

•May 7, 2013 • Leave a Comment
Sera - Protagonist of "Warmth".

Sera – Protagonist of “Warmth”.

Thanks for hanging in there with me through all of the trials and tribulations that 2013 has had to bring. As you know if you follow my blog, my father passed away on January 3 of this year, and it’s been one thing after another since. First we had to raise money for funeral expenses, which I thank God and the many wonderful donors who helped us for the fact that we were able to do. Since then it has been a bit of an emotional rollercoaster for me. I tried to do a physical labor inclusive job while grieving, and it turned out disastrously.  I am passing my classes at school this semester, though, and keeping up with things the best that I can.

One thing I have decided to do, since I have summer coming up and will have time on my hands since I won’t be going to school this summer (I need time off to adjust to my loss and changes in my life, something I didn’t give myself because I didn’t want to withdraw this semester) is that I will be working on a series of re-edited reissues of my first three books.

Well, I am happy to say that the first of the three is already done!

The Warmth Second Edition

What’s New:

  1. New Cover Art:  I’ve revised the cover art for all three editions of the book: the hardback edition (available for $33 on Lulu.com), the paperback (available on CreateSpace for $17.50) – and on the eBook for the Kindle, which will be available in a day or two.
  2. New Layout: The Second Edition features a new, easier-to-read layout based upon several mainstream paperbacks I studied while reformatting it. Chapter headings are easier to find and easier to look at.
  3. Fresh Editing:  I used some new tools, as well as my own eyeballs. Details below.

The Proofreading Experience

WarmthSera CoverI used two different proofreading softwares to improve the quality of editing in the second edition of “Warmth.” I would have used Grammarly, but I couldn’t really afford the $29 monthly fee for use. Also – I started out using Grammarly on the re-edit of my larger tome, the nearly 500 page “The Moon Cried Blood,” and about 45 pages into the editing process, the computer I have Word 2007 installed on stopped working. I do not have Word 2007 on my other computer, the one I wrote all of my novels on, and Word 2003 does not meet the minimum requirements for Grammarly.

The tools I ended up using are Ginger – which is free – and Perfect-It, which is 99 dollars. I have a 30 day trial. If I can come up with 99 dollars, I rate it as totally worth it. I would need the pro version (which costs 99 dollars) due to the length of my files. My preference for these two over Grammarly is not just a cost thing. I had a lot of trouble with the server connection for the Grammarly Word plug-in, so Grammarly basically is only useful to me as a web-based program.

Like Spellcheck, these are assistance devices that work best if the human driving them is also playing close attention. In my ideal world, I would be running all three, because they each catch different types of errors. However, this is not an ideal world. I would have to say that Ginger rocks my socks. Not only is it free, but it is probably the best of the three. However, Grammarly is better with punctuation, and Perfect-It is very good for helping to ferret out inconsistencies such as inconsistent use of numbers (spelled out as words, or as numerical characters), etc. So if I could afford it, I would have all three.

The Grammarly plug in for the internet is really cool, too. Especially cool for bloggers.

Testing out editing and grammar check software

•May 5, 2013 • Leave a Comment

ImageI decided that Grammarly costs too much and I can’t justify it. The deciding point came when the waning battery on my dedicated-to-writing Acer finally totally died, and I found out that the laptop won’t power up on plain old AC from the wall socket without a working battery in there. I figured that out by using a different power cord. So – that being the case, I needed to spend $43 bucks on a half-off priced battery over the internet. That made me realize the $29 a month Grammarly wanted was way out of my price range. Besides, their plug in was constantly losing the server connection when I was trying to use it with MS Word. That made it take forever.

Now, I am trying something called PerfectIt out (30 Day Trial).

So far one thing that I really love about PerfectIt, above MSWord’s built-in features and the Grammarly plug in, is that it is REALLY fast, churning through a 100k + word document. Usually, the checkers choke on these bigger documents. Perfect-it is able to be faster because it breaks down each task: for instance, it checks for inconsistencies in capitalization in one run, pausing before the next task.

Do you have a favorite grammar and spell checking software?

Editors are really valuable. Too bad I can’t afford professional editing. I am going to have to double-check all of my work myself, in some cases first-check it because I don’t have an editor for The Moon Cried Blood. I do have one for Warmth (thank you Aurora Martinez) and Solitude has been partially edited by two people so far. It seems to constantly need more help. Maybe I should just – well, try to help myself this time, if I can.

Either that or I’ll be over on Kickstart, begging for editor funding. lol!

The Mechanics of Things

•May 3, 2013 • 2 Comments

ImageI’m really in a funk about writing lately. I am trying to perfect works that I have no reason whatsoever to believe anyone is actually going to read, and I suppose that shouldn’t really matter to me. It didn’t when I wrote the first three books: after all, my dad might read them, or my mom, and that seemed good enough. But now I’m editing my books (again) and crying over my keyboard, because my dad is dead, and I kind of don’t getting much feedback good or bad from anyone to let me know if people are actually reading anything I write, so I feel supremely unmotivated.

No, I don’t want to finish “Disillusionment”. I don’t think I can.

I just wanted to let you know that “Disiullsionment” is tabled indefinitely. I am not able to write it – I don’t really have any confidence at all that there would be any market for it, and I feel supremely unmotivated about writing it – or writing anything. I’m basically really depressed.

I’m guessing no one really cares if I don’t write it.

I’m going to go back to trying to perfect “The Moon Cried Blood” and crying. But not blood. Just water.

Thank you.

The Summer of Editing

•May 3, 2013 • Leave a Comment

editing_marks_thumbI made a promise to myself today. It’s sort of like a New Year’s Resolution, in a sense, except I don’t believe in New Year’s Resolutions, and this New Year’s Eve, I was spending my last night on Earth in the presence of my father – I spoke to him on the phone over the next few days, but I didn’t see him again between about 10:30 pm on December 31 and when he died January 3rd. But today, I made myself a promise. I will be brave enough to put all of my writing on my laptop and spend time going over it, giving it a second look, and give it another round of proofreading and copy editing. It makes me nervous, but I quit smoking. I should be up to this.  I am pretty sure it will be easier to do if I am not trying to pass college classes at the same time, so I’m going to do it this summer, while I’m out of school.

Grammarly

I discovered Grammarly today, thanks to a kind student in my Shakespeare class. I can’t afford toproofreading pay the $11,000 I was quoted for editing my shortest book, “Warmth.”  If I had $11,000, I wouldn’t be driving a 20 year old car with a huge dent on the front fender and no radio. I would definitely be out buying a radio for my car – AT LEAST, and getting the driver’s seat fixed so that it was secured with actual bolts, and not a combination of ropes and bungie cords. But I can sort of barely afford the around $30 a month that it costs to subscribe to Grammarly – if it works.

Right now I am testing it out on a seven day trial. I am heavily testing it out,  revising “The Moon Cried Blood” – as you probably know “The Moon Cried Blood” is available for free download on May 5th (Cinco de Mayo). The new version won’t be available yet then, but I am working on it.

The Summer of Editing

editing-marksThe goal is to finish a third edition of “Solitude” and a second edition of “The Moon Cried Blood” and “Warmth.” The reason is to address some grammar issues that have been found by my more observant readers. In Self Publishing, you can’t expect to get the level of editing a mainstream published work has without putting a good amount of money into your project (see above). I spent last year putting my profit (which was about $50 a month then) back into proofreading for the books and they still need work.

With “Solitude” I was so fortunate as to have an editor on board, but the amount of time we were able to spend on the first half was greater than the second.

At this point, I’m not looking to make any major changes here. It’s just proofreading and copy editing.

The types of editing: http://www.gramlee.com/blog/different-types-of-copy-editing-services/

The reason? I feel so distracted by issues with the first books that it’s causing me writer’s block, and I want to free my mind to focus on “Disillusionment”.

Cinco de Mayo Giveaway on Sunday, May 5th.

•April 29, 2013 • 1 Comment

ImageThose of you who have read “The Moon Cried Blood” already know that it’s central protagonist, 13 year old Tisha is a young lady of African American and Mexican American heritage living in Los Angeles in the mid 1970s. In this gritty work of dark fantasy and urban fiction, the teen comes to know that she is one of a long line of witches called “Luna” whose powers are connected to the cycles of the moon.

Here is the official description of the book:

It is said that the Wolf may howl at the Moon, but Imagethe Moon never howls at the Wolf. In the gritty urban streets of Los Angeles in 1975, Leticia Gordon is forced to come to terms with many things: the tragic death of her stepmother and baby sister in a car accident, fear she’ll wind up in foster care, and the sudden revelation she belongs to a long line of powerful witches known as Luna – who exhibit first power upon reaching womanhood. Running from foes natural and supernatural, will her newfound powers be the turning point that elevates her position of honor, or will it destroy her like the dark forces that consumed her father? In a world turned upside down where time itself seems in flux, in whom can she trust?

Here is an Amazon customer review of the work:

5.0 out of 5 stars Very powerful imagery September 29, 2012
Format:Paperback
Cycles of the moon, Generations of women, a young woman unaware of her incredible gift. A delicate weaving of history, character development and esoteric overlay that makes for an interesting saga. I read it twice, I missed a lot in the first round with all the symbolism. A lot of work went into the background and technical aspects of the writing itself and it shows.”
 

What is Cinco de Mayo?

ImageCinco de Mayo is Spanish for “the fifth of May” and it began as a celebration of the Mexican Army’s victory over France in the  Battle of Puebla on May 5, 1862. It has since gone on to become a celebration of Mexican American culture in the United States. It is traditionally celebrated here with outdoor activities such as picnics, parades, and festivals. Here in the San Francisco Bay Area, Cinco de Mayo, although a spring festival, is generally the kick-off of the busy summer season of outdoor activities such as street fairs, and frequently coincides with the start of warmer weather as spring comes to a close and we approach summer.
 
Some of the Cinco de Mayo celebrations taking place here in Oakland include a Cinco de Mayo Day party at the Ferry Plaza, and a return of the traditional Fruitvale Cinco de Mayo.
 

Where to get your Free Copy:

ImageAt 12 midnight Pacific Time at the dawning of the day May 5th, 2013 it will become free for Kindle Download at Amazon.com, here is the link:
 
 
If you don’t have a Kindle, no problem! You can get a Kindle reader for your PC for free here:
 
 
Have a Mac or an Android? No Problem! You can get a free reader here:
 
 

Today is Hug A Writer Day!

•April 28, 2013 • 3 Comments

Okay.. maybe I just made that up. But still. Hug a writer. We work our fannies off.  There should be a hug a writer’s day. Today is April 28, 2013 and I officially declare April 28 hug a writer’s day. I honor of “Hug a Writer’s Day” I have a few words of encouragement for you… from the Beatles.

Why You Should Hug A Writer Today

Gregory Hug demonstrates proper writer-hugging technique in this photo with his fiance Sumiko Saulson.

Gregory Hug demonstrates proper writer-hugging technique in this photo with his fiance Sumiko Saulson.

  • You know how you hate getting a job performance review from your boss? Or – if you work at McDonalds, you might be getting one from like, three bosses. Well, a writer gets to look forward to numerous performance reviews from customers (readers) called “customer reviews” that appear on places like Goodreads and Amazon, and if the writer is successful enough, “professional reviews” from newspapers and other periodicals. This can be stressful for the writer. Interestingly, not getting ANY reviews is also stressful for the writer.
  • The writer may be underpaid. If the writer is getting royalties instead of any hourly wage working for someone else, the writer could be getting less than minimum wage.
  • If the writer lives in the United States, the writer has probably just finished dealing with Tax Season. Receiving royalties means having to file an additional tax form. The writer may have a half dozen royalty forms from different publishers or periodicals he or she has gotten small amounts of reportable income from. Your writer is probably suffering post income tax stress right now.
  • Your writer has to keep revising things. Revising things is stressful.

If you are unable to hug your writer in person, I’ve provided a link to this Beatles cartoon for “Paperback Writer” that you can send to your writer friend. The lyrics are also linked to below, in case you’re feeling ambitious and you want to perform an impromptu serenade for your writer loved one.

http://www.sing365.com/music/lyric.nsf/Paperback-Writer-lyrics-The-Beatles/6C24A6E106E6B40C48256BC2001D2199

Writer’s Blah

•April 23, 2013 • 3 Comments

ImageWriter’s block is when you can’t think of anything to say. What about when you can write, but you’re so overwhelmed by other types of writing that life requires you to engage in – say, grantwriting, term paper writing, and yes even the maintenance of your own personal blog – that you can’t seem to set aside the time or dredge up the juice to achieve your writing goals, on a creative bent, because your mind is stuffed with stuff and you are constantly exhausted.

That’s not writer’s block!

I have an idea… let’s give it a new name. Writer’s Blah. What do you think?

Some Literary Facts in Honour of World Book Night

•April 23, 2013 • Leave a Comment

Wow… I didn’t realize today was World Book Night. How cool! Reblogging…

Sumiko Saulson ~ One of the Most Active Women in Horror!

•April 19, 2013 • Leave a Comment

Joslyn Corvis interviewed me. Wow… I’m blushing. Anyway here is her interview:

Sumiko Saulson ~ One of the Most Active Women in Horror!.